作文考试的分数，在托福考试中的占比是非常高的，所以大家需要认真的进行准备，保证考试顺利。跟着留学群的小编看看托福作文评分标准介绍。
一、托福写作的内容
托福包括2个内容：综合写作和独立写作
(1)综合写作
综合写作也就是我们常说的小作文，但是为什么名字是综合写作，当然是有原因的了，我们都知道小作文要求是150字左右，但是托福小作文的精妙之处就在于它的综合考察。首先，会给你一篇passage，文章内容会就某件事来表达一个观点，之后你会听到一个lecture，lecture表达的是与文章完全相反的观点，听完之后才到你来写作的部分，所以综合写作部分之所以为综合，是综合了听、读、写三者一起的作文。
(2)独立写作
看到独立二字大家也可能猜到这部分写作考察我们什么了吧，独立考的是我们独立的思考，对于独立写作的类型大部分都是disagree or agree 的类型，所以需要你同意或不同意一个statement，表达自己的观点。而独立写作题目的妙处就在于无论你是同意还是不同意，你都有很大的空间去论述你的观点，可见出题的深思熟虑。
二、托福写作的评分标准
大家先来看看，官方的评分标准：
5分的文章能够有效地完成任务，文章的组织清晰，有恰当的解释，举例和细节;文章内容连贯，统一;语言运用熟练，词汇丰富，用词得当，尽管可能出现稍许词汇和语法错误。
4分的文章能够较好地完成任务，但是有些观点阐述地不够详细;总体上组织论证不错，使用恰当的解释，举例和细节;文章整体内容连贯统一，但是可能含有冗余，离题和不清晰的连接;语言使用较熟练，有较为丰富的词汇和语法结构，但是也可能有较为明显的小错误，但不影响总体理解。
3分的文章做了任务，用了一些解释，举例和细节;能看出文章的连贯和统一，但分论点的衔接可能不清晰;语言运用稍有欠缺，可能在遣词造句上出现错误造成语义晦涩;有准确的语言和语法结构，但是多样性比较单一。
2分的文章只完成了部分任务，文章组织论证不够充分;解释，举例或者细节不太得当或者不充分;出现明显的用词不当;语法结构错误较多。
1分的文章组织非常混乱;基本没有细节，或者出现不相关细节;严重和频繁的用词和语法错误。
0分的文章仅仅从题目中抄了一些文字，或者完全离题，用非英语语言来写作或者空白卷
熟悉和理解4大评分标准是高分关键
评分标准1：要求考生有效地阐明主题，考生千万不要跑题。从考生的情况看，考生全部跑题现象较少，但是局部跑题现象十分严重，这也是考生不能轻取高分的缘故。
评分标准2：逻辑条理清楚，发展充分。
评分标准3： 考生的论据一定要具体、明确，且对论点有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。
评分标准4：通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程。
托福范文
Some people prefer to buy technological devices as soon as possible， while others prefer to wait for a second to buy them. In my opinion， I prefer to wait， because this will have advantages in product quality， reliability and price.
First of all， when a high-tech device comes out， we usually don’t know how its quality is， because the public is unfamiliar with it. Only after some people buy and use it， we could distinguish whether it is good or bad. If we buy products before then， we may purchase low quality products， which will lead to poor experience and waste of money. For example， a company＇s VR equipment， due to advertising， attracted many customers to rush for the first time； but after the actual use， it was found that the effect was very poor； and as a result， the equipment quickly became unpopular. If these customers chose to wait for the first time， they would find that the VR device was not so good， and turned to purchase better quality products which had been tested by the market.
Second， even if it is a very good technological device， some design problems may not be found， and we will get a defective item if we buy it as soon as it is available to the public. However， if we choose to wait for a moment， these problems may have been discovered and solved， and the reliability of the products will be guaranteed. For example， when iPhone4 has just come out， for design reasons， there were occasional failures of calling by no signals， and the users were complaining about it. The Apple Corp later amended the problem by improving its design. If we purchased iPhone as soon as it came out， we can only get a mobile phone with a problem； and when it came out for a while， the problem is repaired and we could have a very reliable iPhone.
And last， when technological products have just been launched， the price will usually be the highest. After a certain time， in order to promote， the price tend to reduce； devices could be much cheaper if we choose to wait. We may take iPhone4 as an example again. When it was just released， it sold for 649，andafterayear，thepricedroppedto649，andafterayear，thepricedroppedto499. If we purchased at this time， we can save a lot.
In conclusion， we could purchase higher quality， more reliable， and cheaper products if we choose to wait， so I prefer to wait for a while instead of buying these technological devices as soon as they are available to the public.
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