l in the first place，in addition
l On the contrary, in contrast
l to my joy\delight\satisfaction\ surprise\astonishment\amazement\ regret \disappointment，
l of course,
l for instance\example,
l in fact, as a matter of fact
l to be sure， to sum up， to tell the truth, to start with，
l I am sure， I believe\wonder\suppose， it seems， as I see it， what is important (serious)， I’m afraid， it is said
语言的雕琢
聪明的 clever brilliant smart intelligent wise genius bright talented gifted quick-witted quick-minded ingenious
非常 very extremely extraordinarily highly unusually pretty considerably remarkably amazingly astonishingly surprisingly impressively noticeable notably
著名的 well-known famed noted celebrated renowned eminent
Enjoy a nation-wide/world-wide fame/name/recognition/
Celebrity/eminence /reputation be widely recognized acknowledged
关于 regarding concerning involving as regards relating to with respect to with regard to with reference to with relation to
E.g.: Concerning this issue, as far as I am concerned,
I think you are very famous and clever
From my point of view, you are extraordinarily well-known and intelligent.
文章中禁止使用的项目
About ,get ,famous, clever, very, lovely, good, bad, big, many, important
在每个名词前，试图加上一个形容词;在每个形容词前，试图加上一个副词
词汇选择的标准
Understandable
Acceptable
Correct e.g. a slim/ample opportunity take care of yourself
Playwright(剧作家)
Gain/obtain/accumulate/acquire knowledge(获得知识)
Appropriate
Exact
Idiomatic(合乎语言习惯的)
Interesting
段落的实现
⑴例证法 每个理由后面必须同时有例子 每篇文章至少两个例子
提出论点-列举事例-分析事例-得出结论-(重述论点)我认为-因为我觉得-比如说-你看
举例之后 一定要强调这样的例子不胜枚举。。。
Abraham Lincoln
⑵因果法 提出论点-原因-分析条件(如果这样会有什么好处/坏处，而这正是我们所需要/担心的)-得出结果
Lead to/result in
result from
Because of/due to/thanks to/owing to/by reason of/on account of
For 表示“因为”时不能放在句首
Because/for/since/as
As a result/outcome/consequence of
In consequence/in the end/consequently
Therefore/thereby/hence/thus(副词)
So(连词)
⑶ 比较对照法(整体、分项比较)
整体比较的好处：写起来容易 整体印象完整 缺点：两者对比不鲜明
分项比较的好处：两者对比特别鲜明 缺点：零碎的印象，大量的重复
